
Débora #6 – That Afternoon (Updated)
June 16, 2009It was winter of 1998, precisely June 3rd. I was in my last year of Law School in my last week of classes before the finals exams. As I used to work as a trainee in a Law Office in Santo Amaro, in that specifically week, I wanted to finish my job as quickly as possible and go to the library one hour before the beginning of classes in order to study a little bit and solve all my doubts with the teacher before the finals.
But that day, I don´t know what happened to my inflexible and intolerant boss, who told me the week before, that I could leave the office one hour before the usual time until the end of the semester. Even though there was not much work to do and we were great about deadlines, he didn’t allow me to leave the office earlier that day.
As a consequence, there I was, stuck in the middle of that terrible traffic in front of Ibirapuera Park at the time I was suppose to be in class solving all my doubts. Minutes went by, and I couldn’t move my car even 10 meters. I can’t remember the music playing in my radio, but I remember that, despite my stress, I was singing and dancing — assuming it is possible to do that in a moving vehicle — and then I saw THE guy in a S-10 pick up on my right side, staring at me.
I didn’t know if it was because he thought I was crazy, dancing and singing out loud, or if I was pretty or both. Later on, he told me he was looking at my car, a S-10 extended pick-up, asking himself if he did a good job buying a S-10 regular pick-up instead of the extended one, when he noticed the driver of the pick-up and then looked at me. He smiled at me and got my smile back. Encouraged by the response, he started to mime so as to discover my cellphone number.
He was a good looking, charming guy, and owned a nice car I have to admit. He was only asking for my number. As soon as I gave him the number, he called me back at the same time. We started talking, just an innocent flirt.
I missed the class, which I didn’t mind at all. What can I say, exactly seven years later, June 3rd, 2005 we’ve married. In other words, Prince Charming does exist but don´t expect to meet him necessarily in a ball or a party: he can be anywhere.
It was winter of 1998, precisely June 3rd. I was in my last year of Law School in my last week of classes before the finals exams. As I used to work as a trainee in a Law Office in Santo Amaro, (o)n that specific week, I wanted to finish my job as quickly as possible and go to the library one hour before the beginning of classes in order to study a little bit and solve all my doubts with the teacher before the finals.
But that day, I don´t know what happened to my inflexible and intolerant boss, who (had) told me the week before that I (would be able to) leave the office one hour before the usual time until the end of the semester. Even though there was not much work to do and we were great about deadlines, he didn’t allow me to leave the office earlier that day.
As a consequence, there I was, stuck in the middle of that terrible traffic (jam) in front of Ibirapuera Park at the time I was suppose to be in class solving all my doubts. Minutes went by, and I couldn’t move my car (for) even 10 meters. I can’t remember the music playing (o)n my radio, but I remember that, despite my stress, I was singing and dancing — assuming it is possible to do that in a moving vehicle — and then I saw THE guy in a S-10 pick up on my right side, staring at me.
I didn’t know if it was because he thought I was crazy, dancing and singing out loud, or if I was pretty or both. Later on, he told me he was looking at my car, a S-10 extended pick-up, asking himself if he did a good job buying a S-10 regular pick-up instead of the extended one, when he noticed the driver of the pick-up and then looked at me. He smiled at me and got (a) smile back. Encouraged by the response, he started to mime so as to discover my cellphone number. He was a good looking, charming guy, and owned a nice car I have to admit. He was only asking for my number. As soon as I gave him the number, he called me back at the same time. We started talking, just an innocent flirt.
I (ended up) missing class, which I didn’t mind at all. What can I say, exactly seven years later, June 3rd, 2005 we (got) married. In other words, Prince Charming does exist but don´t expect to meet him necessarily in a ball or (at) a party: he can be anywhere.
Debora,
Your paper is very sound and ready for the portofolio. You could do some light cleaning on this draft and submit it for a grade.
Rick