Cláudia # Portofolio 3.1

If developing countries want to become industrial countries, governors  should try to fine tune the life of their people, helping them with food suply, education and medicine. 

First, most of the people in developing countries don’t eat properly because they don’t have enough money to buy a variet of food. Their food habits are based on carbohydrates. The lack of certain elements such as proteins and vitamins that people find in fruits or in meats may cause the process of the development of  body and brain to slow down. If the government provides a varied amount of  food to the needy people, these people might grow up healthier, with a better disposition to have a job and improve the country.  In the bondocks of Sao Paulo, there were cases that families don’t have any other food besides corn, so what happened was that they started stuttering because of the lack of vitamins. Thus, if a country doesn’t invest the minimum in a proper diet to its people, there is no way for the country to be considered a developing country.

Second, educated people have different view of their problems. They are more sensitive to look for solutions, because of the knowlodge that they acquire while studying. So, the government should not only provide space in schools for everybody, but also give incentives to those that want to study. The country only wins with better educated people. But what happens in a developing country is that not  everybody that has the same opportunity to study. For instance, public schools in São Paulo have limited space for students and families with more than two children. They are not allowed to enroll the third child in the school, so not only the country is losing a potential child to study, but also the child is missing out on the opportunity to have a degree and maybe be later not be named the undergod.  A country cannot succeed financially if it doesn’t care about the education of its people, increasing the probability of a country to never develop.

Third, the prices of medicine are increasing day after day, and nowadays, it is almost impossible even for the middle class to buy it. Sometimes, the lack of medicine in hospitals for needy people ends up in tragedy. Some diseases such as cancer and HIV should be provided by the government for free. Adolescents that don’t have enough money to buy pills end up pregnant most of the time and giving birth to unwanted child, illustrating the picture of a developing country. According to a specialist Carolina Saad, graduated in medicine from USP, she says that 60% of the mothers that didn’t want their kids give them to charity.  The whole chain of minor elements could be solved with little effort. Therefore , there are certain improvements that the governor could offer in order to help its people to influence the country to become more developed.

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If developing countries want to become industrial countries, governors  should try to fine tune the life of their people, helping them with food suplly, education and medicine. 

First, most of the people in developing country don’t eat properly, because they don’t have enough money to buy a variet of food, their food habits are based on carbohidrats. The lack of certain elements such as proteins and vitamines that people find in fruits or in meats, may cause the process of development of  body and brain more difficult. If government provides an varied amount of  food to the needed people, they might grow up healthier, with better disposition to have a job and improve the country.  In the bondocks of Sao Paulo, there were cases that families don’t have another food besides corn, so what happened was that they started stuttering because of the lack of vitamines. Thus, if a country doesn’t invest the minimum in a proper diet to its people there is no way out of being a developing country.

Second, educated people have different view of problems, they are more sensitive to look for solutions, because of the knowlodge that they acquire while studying. So, the government should not only provide space in schools for everybody, but also give insentive to those that want to study. The country just has to win with better educated people. But what happens in developing country is that it isn’t everybody that has the same opportunity to study. For instance, public schools in São Paulo have limited space to students and families with more than two children are not allowed to enroll the third child in the scholl, so not only the country is loosing a potential child to study, but also the child is loosing the opportunity to have a degree and maybe be later named an undergod.  A country can not succed finalcialy if doesn’t care about the education of its people.  Thus, increasing the probability of a country to never be developed.

Third, the prices of medicine are increasing day after day, and nowadays are almost impossible for even middle class to buy it. Sometimes the lack of medicine in hospitals for needed people end up with traged. Some diseases such as cancer and HIV should be provided by the government for free. Adolecents that don’t have enough money to buy pilula end up most of the time pregnant, and giving birth to unwanted child is the whole picture of an developing country. According to a specialisted Carolina Saad, graduated in medicine from USP, she says that 60% of the mothers that didn’t want their kids give them to charity.  The whole chain of minor elements could be solved with little effort.  Nevertheless, there are certain improvements that the governor could offer in order to help its people to influence the country to be developed.