Lucía — Portofolio #4

Content = 5/5

Structure = 5/5

Vocabulary = 4/5

Grammar = 4.5/5

Mechanics = 4.5/5

Total Grammar = 23/25 

Mobiles are necessary nowadays in big cities because they save time, they are instantaneous, they make everything easier. If you’re in one side of the city or even a place like a mall or restaurant, you’re not going to call the person screaming, or wait until you go home to call him/her. You just pick up your cell phone, which will be in your pocket or purse since it fits anywhere, and dial the person’s phone number and in a matter of seconds, you’ll be talking to anyone you’d like instead of looking for the person or waiting for him or her. If you need to call the person at that moment, it will be possible because it is always on and available. It would be impossible to live without cell phones because they really make everything much easier. For instance, if you need something straight ahead you just use it, or if you’re lost, if you need to find you’re friends, just to talk. You can take it anywhere because it barely has the size of a wallet. They work everywhere, unless there’s no signal, which isn’t common since everyday they invent a new satellite of source of signal. For instance, once, I went to the movies with some friends and we noticed that a friend was missing. Instead of looking around, we just called her and she told us that she was still on her way. We’d have wasted hours looking for her in that gigantic place. Also, one day I was at school and I had homework due the next class and I accidentally left it home, so I just called my driver and he brought it to me almost instantaneously. It was 5:30 when I remembered that I had to pick up a dress at the laundry that would be closed at 6:00, and I was still at school. I couldn’t make it until 6:10, so I called them and asked if they could hold on for 10 minutes. If I hadn’t been able to call, they’d have closed. Therefore, mobiles are more than necessary nowadays.

Mobiles are necessary nowadays in big cities because they save time, they are instantaneous, they make everything easier. If you’re in one side of the city, neighborhood, or even a place like a mall, restaurant, you’re not going to call the person screaming, or wait until you go home to call him/her, you just pick up your cell phone, which will be in your pocket or purse since it fits anywhere, dial the person’s phone and in a matter of seconds you’ll be talking to anyone you’d like instead of looking for the person or waiting. If you need to call the person at that instant it will be possible because it is always on and available. It would be impossible to live without cell phones because they really make everything much easier like if you need something straight ahead you just use it, or if you’re lost, if you need to find you’re friends, just to talk, you can take it anywhere because it barely has the size of a wallet, they work everywhere unless there’s no signal, which isn’t common since everyday they invent a new satellite of source of signal. Once I went to the movies with some friends and we noticed that I friend was missing, instead of looking around, we just called her and she told us that she was still on her way, we’d have missed hour looking for her in that ginormous place. One day I was at school and I had homework due next class and I accidentally left it home, so I just called my driver and he brought it to me almost instantaneously. It was 5:30 when I remembered that I had to pick up a dress at the laundry that would be closed at 6:00, and I was still at school. I couldn’t make it until 6:10, so I called them and asked if they could hold for 10 minutes and they could if I hadn’t called they’d have closed. Therefore, I think mobiles are more than necessary nowadays.