Because the lack of information given by parents is one of the reasons for unwanted pregancy among teenagers, sex education should be implemented in elementary schools. According Mr. Marcos Ribeiro, consultant of the Health Department, sex education at home is still not frequent, simple and natural, since parents don´t feel confortable talking about sex to their children; they think it is an embarrasing issue to discuss, so part of this necessity of sex education could be solved by teaching it in elementary school avoiding, for instance, unwanted pregancy caused by the lack of information. In several public schools of São Paulo´s boodocks, a sex education program in the elementary level was implemented. This program tackled birth control methods and according to the Education Department, teenage pregnancy decreased by 30% since the program started in 2002. Therefore, sex education in elementary schools can help teenagers to have more information and avoid unwanted pregnancy, mainly those who don´t have sex education at home.
Grace,
This paper is so much better than the ones you had been producing so far. Of course there are still problems with grammar (3.5/5) and mechanics (3.5/5), but the other areas such as content (5/5), structure (5/5) and vocabulary (5/5) are quite solid and American sounding. Congratuations on all your hardwork! Total grade: 22 / 25
Because the lack of information given by parents is one of the reasons for unwanted pregancy among teenagers, sex education should be implemented in elementary schools. According Mr Marcos Ribeiro, consultant of Healthy Ministry, the sex education at home is still not frequent, simple and natural, the parents don´t feel confortable to talk about sex to their children, they think it is a embarrasing issue to discuss, so part of this necessity of sex education could be solved by given it in elementary school avoinding unwanted pregancy caused by the lack of information. In several public schools of São Paulo´s boodocks was implemented an sex education program in elementary level, this program tackles contraceptive methods and according to Education Departament, the teenage pregnancy decreased 30% since the program have started in 2002, Therefore, sex education in elementary schoolscan help teenagers to have more information and avoid unwanted pregnancy, mainly those who don´t have sex education at home.
